Two people burst into a room, then sees the girl sitting there…
Then, inexplicably, the room turns bright, with no mention of anyone turning on the lights. Guy#1 is still shocked, guy#2 hasn’t moved, and the girl is still sitting on the table.
Why? Why not just add in that one line? Why not just keep the characters in the dark? This was bugging me a bit in Little Busters too, , as the CG where Komari falls was drawn in a bright setting, but the events before and after are all set in the evening. It’s not just this though, all the art of rewrite is bugging me.
This looks bad. (THAT ARM…)
This looks worse (th-the…I give up, EVERYTHING).
This is… Well, she’s cute, but I hold something against physics defying+extremely straight pigtails.
There’s this kind of odd vibe surrounding the story too… something just isn’t right for some reason or another… At least the music and system are very well done? I guess?



